2009-2010

English IH, English ICP, English IIH

J. E. Chewning

 

Lesson Plans For This Week

 

School Calendar (A days/B days/Holidays/ Halfdays)

 

Essay Rubric

Mood, Tone, Attitude Words

Positive and Negative Human Traits

Reader Response Notes

Story Structure, Story Elements

ThursDay WordDay ONE

ThursDay WordDay TWO

Verbs to Know

 

 

 

Lesson Plans For This Week

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Chewning’s Lesson Plans  1A

Subject Title : English IIH    Week of: November 16 - 24

Assignments are variable and subject to change 

 

 

Lesson Focus 1

Lesson Focus 2

 

Assessment

Standards

Homework

Tuesday November 17

 

Students will complete presentations

 

Students will diagram 3 sentences

Students will go over the vocabulary for THURSDAY’S TEST

Students will return to diagramming.

 

Presentations: test grade.

Diagrams: preparation for take home test.

 

Read Dawn.

Study vocabulary.

Review Things Fall Apart.

Write Grade Report.

Thursday November 19

 

Students will take the vocabulary test.

 Students will receive a take-home diagram test due Monday

 

Students will take a test Monday, also, on Things Fall Apart

 

Vocabulary test: major test grade.

Diagram test: major test grade

 

Read Dawn.

Study vocabulary.

Review Things Fall Apart.

Students will diagram sentences for a test.

Write Grade Report.

Monday

November 23

 

Students will answers questions about the sentences they diagrammed for the take home test

Students will take the test on Things Fall Apart

 

Diagram test: major test grade

Things Fall Apart: major test grade

 

Read Dawn.

Study vocabulary.

Review Things Fall Apart.

Write Grade Report.

Wednesday November 25

Thanksgiving Break: no school

 

 

 

 

 

Friday November 27

Thanksgiving Break: no school

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1A Current Studies   

Reading:  Students are reading DAWN; 25 reader response notes are due December 2nd.   Students will begin to process Things Fall Apart next week

Language structure: Students will continue to diagram sentences; they will receive a take home test (major test grade).

 

Writing: Friday Write Lights: Students will write a report for two major test grades. To receive a grade, the reports must be signed by parents and receive parent comments. Reports that are two weeks or more late will receive only minimal grades. [This GRADE REPORT is due on or before December 2nd.]

Vocabulary:  Students will have a story test using the roots and prefixes from UNIT TWO.  Students will now return to the roots and prefixes from unit one and prepare for a definition test on the combined lists. 

 

 

 

 

 

Chewning’s Lesson Plans       2A

Subject Title : English IICP         Week of: November 16 – 24   Assignments are variable and subject to change 

 

 

First lesson Focus

Second lesson Focus

 

Assessment

Standards

Homework

Tuesday November 17

 

Students will go over the vocabulary test information for Thursday.

Students will receive reading assignment and reading sheets due December 2nd    

Students will begin to diagram subjects and verbs.

 

Students will receive verb work sheets.

 

 

 

Vocabulary test: major test grade

 

Reading Assignment: major test grade

 

Verb worksheet: homework

 

Read nonfiction; complete chart and reader response notes.

Study vocabulary

Complete verb worksheets

Write Grade Report

Thursday November 19

 

Students will take the vocabulary test. .

Students will diagram subjects and verbs.

 

Vocabulary test: major test grade

Diagramming: class work

 

Read nonfiction; complete chart and reader response notes.

Complete verb worksheets

Write Grade Report

Monday November 23

 

Students will receive the results of the vocabulary test.

Students will receive  worksheets about subject and verb.  

Students will  continue to work in the HSAP Workbook: nonfiction.

 

Worksheets: class work

 

Read nonfiction; complete chart and reader response notes.

Do subject/verb homework sheet

Complete verb worksheets

Write Grade Report

Wednesday November 25

Thanksgiving Break: no school

 

 

 

 

 

Friday November 27

Thanksgiving Break: no school

 

 

 

 

 

 

2A Current Studies

Sentence structure:  Students will begin to diagram: focus now is on finding subjects and verbs.  Verb worksheets focusing on subject/verb agreement will be given.

Writing: Students will write a grade report which is due Tuesday, December 1. In order for the report to be accepted, it must contain a handwritten comment by a parent and a parent signature. Reports that are two weeks or more late will receive only minimal grades.

Vocabulary:  Students will take the final vocabulary test on unit one. 

Reading:  Students will begin to read nonfiction. 

  1. Students will receive a non-fiction assignment.  They will write 10 reader response comments about each title assigned.
  2. Students will receive a reading time chart to be verified by parents.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chewning’s Lesson Plans             4A     Subject Title : English IH       Week of: November 16 - 24

Assignments are variable and subject to change 

 

 

First lesson focus:

Second lesson focus:

 

Assessment

Standards

Homework

Tuesday November 17

Students will go over the vocabulary information for Thursday’s test.

Students will receive a diagramming test to be completed for Monday.

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Students will have 30 minutes to review Call of the Wild.  They will be told about the test Monday.  

 

Vocabulary test: major test grade

 

Call of the Wild test: major test grade

 

 

Study vocabulary.

Review Call of the Wild.

Write the Grade Report.

Thursday

November 19

Students will take the vocabulary test.

Students will receive a new reading assignment

 

Vocabulary test: major test grade.

 

 

Read nonfiction and write reader response notes.

Write Grade Report.

Diagram test sentences.

Monday

November

23

Students will turn in diagramming test

Students will take the Call of the Wild test.

 

Call of the Wild test: major test grade

 

 

Wednesday

November 25

Thanksgiving Break: no school

 

 

 

 

 

Friday November 27

Thanksgiving Break: no school

 

 

 

 

 

 

4A Current Studies:

Reading: 

1. Students will take a test about Call of the Wild. 

2. Students will review Animal Farm.

3.  Students will receive the new reading assignment: nonfiction.

Vocabulary:  Students will have a story test using the roots and prefixes from UNIT TWO.  Students will now return to the roots and prefixes from unit one and prepare for a definition test on the combined lists. 

Sentence Structure:  Students will continue to diagram.  They will have a take home diagramming test. 

Writing: Students will write a grade report. In order to be accepted, the grade report must contain a parent signature and a parent comment. Reports that are two weeks or more late will receive only minimal grades.

 

 

 

 

 

Chewning’s Lesson Plans 1B   Subject Title : English IIH      Week of: November 16 – 24     

Assignments are variable and subject to change 

 

 

Lesson Focus 1

Lesson Focus 2

 

Assessment

Standards

Homework

Monday November 16

 

Students will complete presentations. 

Students will receive new reading assignment

After the presentations, students will return to diagramming. Students will receive a take home diagramming test due Tuesday.

 

Group presentations: major test grade

 

Write Grade Report

Read new assignment: write reader response notes

Due Dec. 4

Wednesday November 18

 

Students will learn about the  Youth in Government project

 

 

 

 

Write Grade Report

Read new assignment: write reader response notes

Due Dec. 4

Friday November 20

 

Students will discuss audience and layout

Students will create a brochure for the island of Sandimas.

 

Brochure: major test grade

 

Write Grade Report

Read new assignment: write reader response notes

Due Dec. 4

Tuesday

November 24

 

Students will complete the take home diagramming test.

Students will begin to discuss Night

 

Take home diagramming: major test grade

 

Write Grade Report

Read new assignment: write reader response notes

Due Dec. 4

Thursday November 26

Thanksgiving Break: no school

 

 

 

 

 

 

IB Current Studies:

Reading:  Students will read new assignment: reader response notes due Dec. 2

Language structure: Students will continue to diagram sentences.  They will receive a take home test (major test grade).

Writing: Friday Write Lights:

1.  Students will write a Grade Report for 2 major test grades.  In order to turn the Grade Report in, the student must get a parent signature and comment written onto the report.  Reports that are two weeks or more late will receive only minimal grades. Reports that are two weeks or more late will receive only minimal grades.

2.  Students will create a travel brochure for Sandimas.

Vocabulary:  Students will have a story test using the roots and prefixes from UNIT TWO.  Students will now return to the roots and prefixes from unit one and prepare for a definition test on the combined lists. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chewning’s Lesson Plans 2B    Subject Title : English IICP   Week of November 16 - 24

Assignments are variable and subject to change 

 

 

First lesson Focus

Second lesson Focus

 

Assessment

Standards

Homework

Monday November 16

 

Students will receive reading assignment and reading sheets due December 2nd  

 

 

 

 

Students will begin to diagram subjects and verbs.

 

Students will receive verb work sheets: subject/verb agreement.

 

 

 

Reading Assignment: major test grade

 

Verb worksheet: homework

 

Read nonfiction; complete chart and reader response notes.

Complete verb worksheets

Write Grade Report

Wednesday November 18

 

Students will diagram subjects and verbs

 

Students will receive the results of the vocabulary test. 

 

Students will be told about the next vocabulary test that will be on Tuesday.

Students will work in the HSAP Workbook: generalization.

 

Students will receive verb work sheets: subject/verb agreement.

 

Diagramming: class work

 

Read nonfiction; complete chart and reader response notes.

Complete verb worksheets

Write Grade Report

Study vocabulary

Friday November 20

 

Students will be reminded about the vocabulary test.

 

Students will discuss audience and layout

Students will create a brochure for the island of Sandimas.

 

Brochure: major test grade

 

Write Grade Report

Read new assignment: write reader response notes

Due Dec. 4

Study vocabulary

Tuesday November 24

 

Students will take the vocabulary test.

Students will continue to work in the HSAP workbook. 

 

Vocabulary test: major test grade

 

Write Grade Report

Read new assignment: write reader response note

 

Thursday November 26

 

Thanksgiving Break: no school

 

 

 

 

 

2B Current Studies:

Sentence structure:  Students will begin to diagram subject and verb.  They will work on worksheets dealing with subject/verb agreement.

Writing:

1. Students will write a Grade Report about their own grades from the first quarter. In order to receive credit for the report (which will account for two test grades) the students must have parent comments and parent signature. Reports that are two weeks or more late will receive only minimal grades.

2.  Students will write a brochure.

Vocabulary:  Students will take the fourth vocabulary tests on the first set of vocabulary terms. 

Reading:  Students will read the new nonfiction assignment.  They will write reader response notes and will keep the parent-student reading chart.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chewning’s Lesson Plans             4B    Subject Title : English IH           Week of November 16 - 24                   Assignments are variable and subject to change 

 

 

First lesson focus:

Second lesson focus:

 

Assessment

Standards

Homework

Monday

November 16

Students will receive a diagramming test to be completed for Tuesday.

Students will complete group presentations.

They will be told about the Animal Farm test Wednesday.  

Students will have 30 minutes to review Animal Farm. 

 

Vocabulary test: major test grade

 

Call of the Wild test: major test grade

 

 

Study vocabulary.

Review Call of the Wild.

Write the Grade Report.

Wednesday

November 18

Students will go over the vocabulary information for Tuesday’s test

 

Students will

 

 

Students will work on the take home diagramming test

 

Vocabulary test: major test grade.

 

 

Read nonfiction and write reader response notes.

Write Grade Report.

Diagram test sentences.

Friday

November

20

Students will receive the new reading assignment

Students will discuss layout, audience, purpose.

Students will create a brochure for Sandimas. 

 

 

 

 

Tuesday

November 24

Students will turn in diagramming test

Students will take the vocabulary test.

 

 

 

 

Thursday November 26

Thanksgiving Break: no school

 

 

 

 

 

 

4B Current Studies:

Reading:  Students will read literature book assignments to take notes on and to compare.

Vocabulary:  Students will take the next vocabulary test from unit two. 

Sentence Structure:  Students will continue to diagram.  They will diagram CLAUSES and will work on a take-home test.    

Writing:

1.  Students will write a Grade Report which will account for two major test grades.  The report is due on or before Wednesday, December 3. Reports must have parent signatures and parent comments to be accepted.  Reports that are two or more weeks late will receive minimal grades.

2.  Students will create a travel brochure.

 

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South Florence High School 2009-2010 Calendar

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         Interim Reports

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      Interim Reports

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25 reader response notes/Night

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        End 1st Quarter

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       Early Dismissal

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            No School

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  Teacher  Workday

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      Interim Reports

16                    A

       Interim Reports

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22                    A

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   Interim Reports

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    Interim Reports

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Early Dismissal

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½ Day for Students

27                      B

Last Day for Students

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Teacher Workday

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Positive and Negative Human Traits      (return)

Positive Human Traits:

 

Accepting

Assertive

Balanced

Beautiful

Careful

Clear-minded

Compassionate

Confident

Courageous

Creative

Curious 

Energetic

Enthusiastic

Faithful

Firmness of mind

Flexible

Forgiving

Free-spirited

Generous

Gentle

Graceful

Grateful

Harmonious

Honest

Hopeful

Humble

Joyful

Kind 

Smart

Loving

Moral

Nurturing

Objective

Open 

Optimistic

Passionate

Patient

Peaceful

Persistent

Playful

Purposeful

Resilient

Serene

Simple

Spiritual

Stable

Steadfast

Strong

Tender

Tolerant

Vital

 

Negative Human Traits:

 

Rebellious,
Distant, cold
Self-satisfied
Closed, secretive
Callous
Inconsiderate
Uncooperative, combative
Fearful
Rude
Hostile
Does what is convenient
Unenthusiastic
Tight, constricting
Life can't be trusted
Lack of faith in self
Others can't be relied on
Inflexible, rigid, stubborn
Resentful, spiteful
Authoritarian, controlling
Hostile
Wasteful
Stingy, selfish
Ill-will
Ungrateful, treacherous
Dishonest, deceiving
Arrogant, ego-centric
Indifferent
Complacent
Jealous
Mean
Immature
Vain
Close-minded
Pessimistic
Relenting
Naive
Disrespectful
Unresponsive
Lack of self confidence
Directed by externals 
Undisciplined, indulgent
Self-centered
Dependent
Selfish
Insensitive
Silly, trivial, petty
Insincere
Social approval required
Unsympathetic
Insists on own view
Thoughtless, callous
Suspicious, mistrusting
Pretentious, proud
Selfish
Stubborn, unwilling
Convenience first
 

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Mood, Tone, Attitude Words

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One main type of question asked on reading comprehension passages entails identifying the mood, tone, or attitude expressed in a passage.  It is important to know what the words mood, tone, attitude mean, and what words describe mood, tone, and attitude.  Often the answers are two-word answers; in this case, both words must be accurate for the choice to be the correct one.

sympathetic

restrained

cautious

apathetic

aloof

satirical

candid

bitter

loathing

sardonic

dispassionate

contemptuous

sentimental

threatening

amused

prosaic

analytical

condescending

pragmatic

ambivalent

patronizing

tentative

ironic

defensive

disinterested

uninterested

disguised irony

cautious speculation

dramatic revelation

philosophical resignation

weary resignation

unqualified endorsement

apologetic approval

analytic objectivity

tolerant acceptance

grudging admiration

unalloyed suspicion

gentle mockery

loft indifference

excited enthusiasm

indulgent tolerance

fascinated curiosity

cautious skepticism

disapproving dismissal

politically offensive

delightfully sentimental

morally admirable

carelessly irrelevant

deep despair

pretended indifference

casual indifference

calm assurance

apprehensive resolve

excited expectation

unqualified appreciation

fundamental dissatisfaction

apathetic acceptance

violent indignation

apologetic regret

self-righteous pomposity

awe-struck fascination

affectionate delight

momentary doubt

solemn apprehension

flippant sarcasm

skeptical suspicion

aloof disinterest

sentimental regret

 

 

 

 

Verbs to know:

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Infinitive                                                Present                                  Past                                        Past Participle

To become                                            become                                 became                                  have become

To begin                                                 begin                                      began                                     have begun

To break                                                                break                                      broke                                     have broken

To bring                                                 bring                                       brought                                  have brought

To build                                                  build                                       built                                        have built

To burst                                                 burst                                       burst                                       have burst

To buy                                                    buy                                         bought                                   have bought

To catch                                                 catch                                      caught                                    have caught

To choose                                              choose                                   chose                                     have chosen

To come                                                 come                                      came                                      have come

To cost                                                   cost                                         cost                                         have cost

To dive                                                   dive                                        dived/dove                           have dived

To do                                                      do                                           did                                          have done

To draw                                                  draw                                       drew                                       have drawn

To drink                                                 drink                                       drank                                      have drunk

To drive                                                 drive                                       drove                                     have driven

To eat                                                     eat                                          ate                                          have eaten

To fall                                                     fall                                           fell                                          have fallen

To fly                                                      fly                                            flew                                        have flown

To forget                                                forget                                     forgot                                     have forgotten

To give                                                   give                                         gave                                        have given

To go                                                      go                                            went                                       have gone

To grow                                                  grow                                       grew                                       have grown

To hit                                                      hit                                           hit                                           have hit

To keep                                                  keep                                       kept                                        have kept

To know                                                 know                                      knew                                      have known

To lay                                                      lay                                           laid                                          have laid

To lie                                                      lie                                            lay                                           have lain

To ride                                                   ride                                         rode                                       have ridden

To ring                                                    ring                                         rang                                        have rung

To rise                                                    rise                                         rose                                        have risen

To run                                                    run                                          ran                                          have run

To see                                                    see                                          saw                                         have seen

To shake                                                shake                                      shook                                     have shaken

To shrink                                                shrink                                     shrank                                    have shrunk

To sing                                                    sing                                         sang                                        have sung

To sink                                                    sink                                         sank                                        have sunk

To slay                                                    slay                                         slew                                        have slain

To speak                                                speak                                      spoke                                     have spoken

To spend                                                spend                                     spent                                      have spent

To spring                                                spring                                     sprang                                    have sprung

To steal                                                  steal                                        stole                                       have stolen

To strive                                                 strive                                      strove                                     have striven

To swim                                                  swim                                       swan                                       have swum

To take                                                   take                                        took                                        have taken

To teach                                                 teach                                      taught                                     have taught

To think                                                  think                                       thought                                  have thought

To throw                                                throw                                     threw                                     have thrown

To wear                                                  wear                                       wore                                       have worn

To write                                                 write                                       wrote                                    have written

 

 

PACT Essay Rubric

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Score    Content and Development         Organization                                                          Voice                                                       Conventions

1    There is no clear central idea.

 

Details are absent or confusing.

 

There is no sense of focus.

1 No plan for presenting information is evident.

 

Information is presented in random order.

 

May lack an introduction, body, and conclusion.

1 Uses simple vocabulary.

 

Phrasing may be repetitive or confusing.

 

There is little sentence variety; reading is monotonous. 

 

There is little awareness of audience; tone may be inappropriate.

1 Rules of standard English usage are not applied; there are frequent and serious errors in standard written English.

 

Sentences are generally incorrectly formed.

 

There are frequent and serious errors in capitalization, punctuation, and spelling.

 

Errors distort the writer’s meaning.

2  Central idea may be unclear.

 

Details may be sparse; more information is needed to clarify the central idea.

 

Focus may shift or be lost causing confusion for the reader.

2 There is some evidence of an organizational strategy.

 

The progression of ideas may be simplistic, repetitious or somewhat random.

 

Attempts an introduction, body, and conclusion.

2 Uses both general and precise vocabulary.

 

Phrasing may not be effective, and may be predictable or obvious.

 

Some sentence variety that results in reading that is sometimes rhythmic; may be mechanical.

 

Aware of audience; tone is appropriate.

2 Rules of standard English usage are applied inconsistently; there is a pattern of errors in standard written English.

 

Sentences may be limited to simple constructions or be incorrect.

 

There are many errors in capitalization, punctuation, and spelling.

 

Errors interfere distort the writer’s meaning.

 

Score    Content and Development

3 Presents a central idea about the topic.

 

Attempts to develop the central idea, but details presented may be general or the elaboration may be uneven.

 

Focus is generally sustained but may shift slightly.

 

Organization

3 A clear organizational strategy is present.

 

There is usually a logical progression of ideas.

 

There is an introduction, body, and conclusion.

 

Voice

3 Uses precise or vivid vocabulary appropriate for the topic.

Phrasing is effective, not predictable or obvious.

 

Varies sentence structures to promote rhythmic reading.

Strongly aware of audience; tone is consistent and appropriate.

 

Conventions

3 Rules of standard English usage are usually applied; there may be a few errors in standard written English.

Sentences are usually constructed correctly; more sophisticated structures may not be attempted or done correctly.

 

There are some errors in capitalization, punctuation, and spelling.

 

Errors do not interfere with the writer’s meaning.

4 Presents a clear central idea about the topic.

 

Fully develops the central idea with insightful and relevant details.

Sustains focus on central idea throughout the writing.

4 A clear organizational strategy is present; there is evidence of a plan for presenting information.

 

There is a logical progression and smooth transitions between ideas.

 

There is a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

15 = 100

14= 93

13=86

12= 79

11= 72

10 = 65

9 = 58

8 = 55

4 Rules of standard English usage are applied consistently; there may be minor errors in standard written English.

 

Sentences are constructed correctly  the ability to form sophisticated  structures is displayed.

 

There are few errors in capitalization, punctuation, and spelling.

 

Errors, when present, do not detract from the writer’s meaning.

 

 

 

Story  Structure :  the elements of a story  [plot, character, setting, theme, point of view]

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1.  Point of view/ voice—the person who is telling the story

                a.  1st person—the story is told by a person who says “I, we”

                b.  3rd person limited—the story is told by a person who says “he, she, they” who only knows what is happening to certain characters

                c.  3rd person omniscient—the story is told by a person who says “he, she, they” who pretty much knows everything that is going on with all of the characters

2.  Setting—when and where the story takes place

3.  Mood—how the setting and the author’s presentation of the characters makes the reader feel; how the characters feel due to where they are and what is going on

4.  Tone—how the characters speak, the “tone of voice” the characters use…very much the same as “mood”

5.  Plot

                a.  introduction—the first of the story where the author reveals the characters, the conflict, the setting

                b.  rising action—the series of events that cause problems for the protagonist

                c.  climax/ denouement—the “unraveling” of the complications: everything is going to be better from this point on

                d.  falling action—the calm that follows the climax

                e.  resolution—how the story ends

                f.  conflict—often characterized as “Man vs. Man”, “Man vs. Nature”, “Man vs. god”, or “Man vs. Himself”

                                i.  internal conflicts—“Man vs. Himself”—a c